I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Korbyn, I'm Jason from Belfast School. I like how you added what will happen to the rabbits when they put the house where the rabbits are. When I heared that the rabbits had to move out, it reminded me of when I moved out of my old house. Maybe next time you could add who they are, and why they are putting the house there. Do you like rabbits?
Kia Ora Korbyn, I'm Jason from Belfast School. I like how you added what will happen to the rabbits when they put the house where the rabbits are. When I heared that the rabbits had to move out, it reminded me of when I moved out of my old house. Maybe next time you could add who they are, and why they are putting the house there. Do you like rabbits?
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