I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Could you make your colours lighter so its a bit easier to read. I really like your New zealand flag picture. I love motorbikes and pizza too. What is the name of your favourite cartoon ? From Josh.
Kia ora Korbyn,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the world of blogging! I can't wait to see the great learning you share on your blog. Well done completing your first blog post.
Vicki
Hi
ReplyDeleteCould you make your colours lighter so its a bit easier to read.
I really like your New zealand flag picture.
I love motorbikes and pizza too.
What is the name of your favourite cartoon ? From Josh.
hello
ReplyDeletemaybe you should stick to one colour.
I like dog to I have been asking my dad for a dog
I also like your photo to from Ethan
from Ethan
Hello maybe you should stick to one colour to your all about me and I really like the dogs whats your favourite dog from Ajia
ReplyDeleteHi, I like how you put two images of two dogs, are those you're favourite breeds? I'd like to know!
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Hi Korbyn I like your all about me poster with your name and the motor bike and your colours that you put in your poster.
ReplyDeleteFrom Simon.